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✨ Similes: Making Comparisons
🎯 Starter
💡 Concept
✍️ Skill
🔄 Recap
🏆 Challenge
📝 Summary
🎯 Fun Starter
A spaceship in the desert…
🧑‍🏫 Your Tutor Says:

Today's key concept is simile — one of the quickest ways writers create powerful pictures in your head. We'll spot similes "out in the wild" and make our own!
The first thing she noticed was a soft yellow light filling a handsome room. Feeling like Alice at the entrance of Wonderland, she stepped inside, more excited than afraid….
Quick question: Alice enters Wonderland and everything feels strange and dreamlike. How might discovering a spaceship in the middle of a desert feel similar?
🧠 Warm-up: Write 1–2 ideas (curious? unreal? entering a new world?)
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💡 Key Concept
What is a Simile?
🧑‍🏫 Your Tutor Says:

A simile is a comparison that helps the reader understand a feeling or image more deeply — like opening a little "idea box" in your mind.

Spot the comparison:

"This comparison… helps us understand how Beth feels — it is like a small box filled with ideas that the reader can unpack."

✅ Rule: A simile must use like or as
✅ Definition: When we compare one thing with something different, using "as" or "like."
✅ Handy memory: similes show similarities.
✍️ Key Skill
Complete the Similes
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Let's practise completing similes — and then "open the box" to unpack what they suggest.
1) Naughty as a…
2) Busy as a…
3) Bright like the…
Open the box: "Bright like the sun" suggests it is…
Open the box: "Busy as a bee" suggests the person is…
Give 1–2 ideas (focused, hardworking, active…).
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🔄 Recap
Simile Rules (Quick!)
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Let's lock it in. If you can remember these rules, you can spot similes and explain them in exams.

✅ A simile compares two different things.

✅ It must use like or as.

✅ The comparison must match (bright → sun's brightness, not its size!).

✅ Not every sentence with "like/as" is a simile — sometimes it's just literal.

Quick check: Is this a simile?
"Beth was thinking how much she would like to have a bed like this."
🏆 Challenge
Spot the Similes!
🧑‍🏫 Your Tutor Says:

Now we'll spot similes in a real paragraph — and decide what they suggest (figurative vs literal).
The sofa was soft like a cloud and Beth was thinking how much she would like to have a bed like this when all at once she felt herself sinking deeply into the cushion as if a great hand were pushing her down. For several moments it was as if she were riding the roller-coaster at the carnival.
1) Can you spot the similes? (Write them down.)
Tip: Look for like or as if comparisons.
2) What do you think has happened?
If you choose a literal answer, we'll explain figurative language.
She went to the window. The dwindling earth was becoming a green ball against the black deeps of space. The stars were bright and seemed as countless as the sands of the seashore. The view made Beth terribly homesick.
3) Identify the simile
4) What does the simile suggest about Beth's feelings?
📝 Summary
Lesson Complete!
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🧑‍🏫 Your Tutor Says:

Brilliant work! You can now spot similes, explain what they suggest, and avoid tricky "fake similes" that only use the word like/as.
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What You Learned Today:

✨ A simile compares two different things using like or as

✨ Similes are "idea boxes" — they add extra meaning and feeling

✨ Not every "like/as" sentence is a simile (it might be literal)

✨ You can use similes to explain characters' feelings and settings